Outstanding Work from Year 7!

This is an extract from an amazing short story written by Cristina Kurimai Giner in year seven! This story talks about her outback experience and she describes everything in vivid detail. Here's a taste:

"The soft breeze made the beach even more special, it twisted the cotton candy clouds and converted them into a shield; a shield to protect us from a powerful fireball, the sun. Incredible tricks were played on my eyes, I seemed to believe that a huge orange hand was stretching towards the horizon blending into pinks and reds creating a mesmerizing vision."

Margarita Grushetskaya